Agnishatdal Chaitra 1426 March 2020
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Critique by SB
By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!
Ateet by Labanya: Fantastic poem, haunting and beautiful.
Glory days by saptarchi: A question that haunts so many of us, will Bengal ever shine again, chances look slim with each passing day though! Apparently whoever sits on throne of Bengal becomes Ravana for sure!
Masai by Brieuc Martin Onraet: Finally the story concludes with a set of photographs that makes me envious, Brian you have had a wonderful life! Thank you for sharing these with us!
Vikrama aur betala by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: I wonder what will happen next, will those creatures really come to life?
Gardens of Sarusammog by Troy David Loy: I love Saru, enjoy every story about him, I have read this one before and will love to read more of Saru for sure!
Never go back by Dom Collucci: Life truly is one way road, there is no turning back and going back! Once you have moved forward your past is gone forever! Great reminder soulbro.
Bitter Pill dose 28 by Bitter Pill: politics 4: One wonders if politicians are born with conscience and then they dump it or they are born without it from their mother’s womb!
The shearer by Pat Ritters: Great piece, well he was lucky that he was not jailed, only held there to calm him down! Lucky him!
Dirkball by Robert Sherriff: another beautiful painting from the book!
I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!